44 Writing About Poetry
In the “Intro to Poetry” chapter, we covered the first steps to writing about poetry–choosing a poem and reading it carefully to think about what the poem means to you and to come up with some ideas about what the author is trying to tell readers through the poem. In this chapter, we’ll take the next steps to writing critically about poetry. As we discussed in the previous chapter, these are steps that you’ll need to take when writing about any academic text, as well.
Step 3: Research the Poem
Remember that, while your response and connection to a particular poem is dependent upon your experience, part of better understanding poetry is learning more about the author and the context of the poem. The combination of your own understanding and the support of strong outside sources will make your argument more powerful.
Primary Evidence is the thing we study. In academic writing, this kind of evidence differs according to discipline. In the field of English literature, primary evidence comes from the poem, novel, short story, play, or memoir you are studying. In this case, your primary source is the poem you have chosen. Always cite the poem in your Works Cited page, along with other outside sources!
A student, for example, might present direct quotes from the novel The Sun Also Rises supporting specific claims he forwards in his argument, as well as summarized and paraphrased passages in which he describes, in his own words, key occurrences in the novel. Below, he summarizes a conversation between Jake and Robert Cohn, condensing a lengthy passage of dialogue into one sentence:
Later, paraphrasing the novel’s description of Jake’s and his friends’ response to a bullfight, the student might translate Hemingway’s words into his own in about the same number of words as the original passage:
These examples from the primary text support the student’s argument, but how does he decide when to quote, summarize, or paraphrase? These decisions are important ones for effectively incorporating primary evidence into an essay. Here are a few guidelines as you consider these options in your own writing:
- Use the shortest quote possible to generate (a) the evidence needed and (b) the effect you seek. Be careful to avoid long quotes unless they serve a significant purpose in forwarding your argument. Do use quotes to “liven up” your argument, to bring the voice of the literary text into your academic prose.
- Use summary to provide a broad-scoped piece of evidence (a long passage from the novel, for example) to the reader. That “Jake and Brett have multiple tension-filled encounters” (Bill’s summary) is evidence that they still care for each other even though they cannot overcome Jake’s impotence to settle into a committed relationship. There may be no need in this section of Bill’s essay to focus more closely on particular tension-filled exchanges.
- Employ paraphrase when the content of a scene or passage is pertinent but does not require the original language itself. Bill’s description of Jake’s and Brett’s behavior during the bullfight is a helpful example of effective paraphrase use.
Although the proof that Jake’s struggles reveal the destructive potential of war must come from the novel itself, the primary source, the student can use secondary sources to (a) help explain his perspective on the novel, and (b) indicate how his argument fits into the ongoing scholarly dialogue about the novel. Plenty of people have contributed to the conversation on the meaning of The Sun Also Rises. The student’s goal is to say something new, to bring the reader fresh insight about the novel, to contribute something original to the conversation. To clarify the significance of his argument, he can integrate material from carefully selected scholarly articles.
Start by creating a list of questions about the poem that you’ve chosen. After reading the poem and thinking about it a bit, what questions do you still have? What would you like to know about the author and his/her experiences? For example, if you’ve chosen “Mother to Son,” by Langston Hughes, you might wonder if the poem is about his actual mother. For Steven Crane’s, “War is Kind,” you might wonder what his experience with war was.
While there are certainly times when citing a website or other online source might be appropriate, when writing a paper about literature for an English course, the sources you choose should be scholarly articles and/or books by people who are qualified to discuss literature. Remember, since writing about literature is a step toward learning to write about academic texts, it’s important to also use academic sources in our discussions about literature. While you may have some luck finding good articles or even the full text of books with a google search, your best bet is to use the YC databases. In addition to knowing that you are finding academic sources, another benefit to using the databases is that there is a Cite button on every source that gives you the correct citation!
Here is a video with a brief review of how to use the databases at YC:
If you need more help, do contact the librarians at YC. They are extremely helpful!
About the Author
You might want to begin by seeking the author’s biography. After performing our own analysis, it can be intriguing and sometimes helpful to consider the author’s life. For instance, Hughes wrote during the Harlem Renaissance, the first large-scale African American artistic movement. Although he had read the poetry of many well-regarded British and American poets, he determined to raise the status of African American folk forms, challenging the idea that great art must follow the traditions of European forms. Adding this biographical and historical component to our study increases our understanding of the importance of Hughes’s contribution to the improvement of African American lives and his celebration of African Americans’ part in shaping U.S. culture.
Author’s biographies can often be found in the Literature Criticism by Gale database. The video below shows how to find an author’s biography in the database and showcases how this first source can be a springboard for the rest of your research.
Please note that the Literature Online database has been renamed Literature Criticism by Gale.
About the Poem
The author’s biography might answer many of our research questions. As we continue on in our research, we have several options:
- If you still have additional questions, your next step should be to attempt to try to find the answers to those questions.
- You might choose to try to find a source about the poem you’ve chosen to see what academic writers have said about it. For example, you might search for a source that discusses Dickinson’s “I saw a dying eye” to see what scholars believe it means.
- You might choose to try to find a source that discusses the author’s work as a whole. For example, you might find a source that discusses Langston Hughes’ poetry.
- You might look for a source that focuses on the theme of the poem and uses the poem as an example. For example, you might look at the psychology of grief to better understand “Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night.”
- You might look for context of the poem. If the poem is about a historical event, like Browning’s “Meeting at Night” and “Parting at Morning,” you might want to find more information about their love story. Or you might want to look for information about the Civil War to better understand Crane’s perspective on war in “War is Kind.”
It’s a really good idea to create a Research Journal to help you keep track of your sources and what you are learning from them. See “Keeping a Research Journal” if you need a reminder of how to create a research journal. Here is a sample research journal based on Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 66”:
De Grazia, Margreta, and Adena Rosmarin. “Interpreting Shakespeare’s Sonnets.” PMLA, vol. 100, no. 5, 1985, pp. 810–812. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/462100. Accessed 23 Mar. 2020.
This is a letter to the editor and a response regarding how to interpret Shakespeare’s sonnets.
“It is well known that Shakespeare’s sonnets were a Romantic obsession because their generically “personal” rhetoric made them seem the key to Shakespeare’s heart” (De Grazia, 811)
HOLTON, AMANDA. “AN OBSCURED TRADITION: THE SONNET AND ITS FOURTEEN-LINE PREDECESSORS.” The Review of English Studies, vol. 62, no. 255, 2011, pp. 373–392. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/23016433. Accessed 23 Mar. 2020.
Notes: History of the sonnet
Henneman, John Bell. “The Man Shakespeare: His Growth as an Artist.” The Sewanee Review, vol. 5, no. 1, 1897, pp. 95–126. JSTOR, www.jstor.org/stable/27527919. Accessed 23 Mar. 2020.
Stockard, Emily E. “Patterns of Consolation in Shakespeare’s Sonnets 1-126.” Shakespearean Criticism, edited by Michelle Lee, vol. 42, Gale, 1999. Gale Literature Criticism, https://link-gale-com.proxy.yc.edu/apps/doc/DXUIHA790857588/LCO?u=yava&sid=LCO&xid=65e42aed. Accessed 23 Mar. 2020.
Frost, Adam. Shakespeare, William, 1564-1616. ProQuest, Ann Arbor, 2001. ProQuest, https://proxy.yc.edu/login?url=https://search-proquest-com.proxy.yc.edu/docview/2137919713?accountid=8141.
Notes: Biography of Shakespeare
Bevington, David. “Sonnets.” The Necessary Shakespeare. Pearson, 2009.
Notes: A summary of Shakespeare’s sonnet authorship.
Quotes: “The wary consensus of most scholars is that the sonnets were written over a number of years…before 1598, but some perhaps later and even up to the date of publication in 1609” (Bevington).
“Love and friendship are a refuge for the poet faced with hostile fortune and an indifferent world” (Bevington.”
“…the bond between poet and friend is extraordinarily strong” (Bevington).
“”The English form of three quatrains and a concluding couplet lends itself to a step-by-step development of idea and image, culminating in an epigrammatic two-line conclusion that may summarize the thought of the preceding twelve lines or give a sententious interpretation of the images developed up to this point” (Bevington).
“His emphasis on friendship seems new, for no other sequence addressed a majority of its sonnets to a friend rather than to a mistress…” (Bevington).
“…the exaltation of friendship over love was itself a widespread Neoplatonic commonplace recently popularized in the writings of John Lyly” (Bevington).
Here is a video in which Dr. Palmer shows a class how to conduct research and compile a research journal for Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 66.”
MLA Citation Review
Please complete this lesson on MLA formatting:
Citing Articles and Books
Here are the basic MLA formats for citing articles and books:
Works Cited: Achenbach, Joel. “America’s river.” Washington Post, 5 May 2002, www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/articles/A13425-2202May1.html. Accessed 20 July 2003.
In text: (Achenbach, pp)
Article in a database:
Works Cited: Langhamer, Claire. “Love and Courtship in Mid-Twentieth-Century England.” Historical Journal, vol. 50, no. 1, 2007, pp. 173-96. ProQuest, doi:10.1017/S0018246X06005966. Accessed 27 May 2009.
In text: (Langhamer, pp)
Works Cited: Gorman, Elizabeth. Prairie Women. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1986.
In text: (Gorman, pp)
A Poem from This Text:
Works Cited: Frost, Robert. “The Road Not Taken.” The Worry Free Writer, 2020. http://theworryfreewriter.pressbooks.com.
In text: (Frost)
Note that the in text citation (what is in parenthesis after a quote) is the first word/s in the Works Cited listing. Every source listed in your Works Cited should be cited at least once in the text of the paper.
Creating a Works Cited page
In an MLA paper, the sources are listed at the end of the paper on the Works Cited page. Please follow the guidelines discussed in the video below when creating your Works Cited page. Remember, you can simply click the cite button for each source you find in the Library Databases for the correct MLA citation.
What if I have two sources from the same author?
- Alphabetize the sources by the title of the work.
- For the second source, use dashes instead of the author’s name to show that the author is the same.
- In your in text citations, use the author’s last name and a shortened version of the title.
Works Cited Entries
Seaman, Donna. “A Poet’s Legacy.” American Libraries, vol. 32, no. 9, 2001, pp. 86. ProQuest, https://proxy.yc.edu/login?url=https://www.proquest.com/trade-journals/poets-legacy/docview/197144349/se-2.
——. “What Lips My Lips have Kissed: The Loves and Love Poems of Edna St. Vincent Millay / Savage Beauty: The Life of Edna St. Vincent Millay.” The Booklist, vol. 97, no. 22, 2001, pp. 2077. ProQuest, https://proxy.yc.edu/login?url=https://www.proquest.com/trade-journals/what-lips-my-have-kissed-loves-love-poems-edna-st/docview/235487727/se-2.
In Text Citations
(Seaman, “A Poet’s”)
Step 4: Create a Thesis and Outline
Once you have completed your research, your first step is to think about what you want to say about the poem. Hopefully, you are clear at this point about what the poem means to you and what you think the author is trying to say. Now your job is to think of something to say about the poem that is uniquely yours. Topics might include the following:
- What the theme of the poem is.
- How the author uses Elements of Poetry to create the theme of the poem.
- How understanding the author or the cultural context of the poem deepens the meaning.
Generally, your research will guide your decision about what to write about. Think about what you think is the most important thing for readers to understand about the poem.
If you are still completely stumped about what to write about, you might choose the option #2 above because it is pretty straightforward. Since you’ve already done quite a bit of reflecting on the poem, in addition to all of your research, you should have a clear idea of what the theme is and what elements of poetry are used in the poem. Your thesis, then, is a combination of the two. ie “The author shows readers that __________ by using ______, ______, and _______.”
Your paper should have a minimum of three points, but it can have more. Let’s say that a student has chosen Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 66” as their poem. Here is their thesis:
Note that the thesis combines the theme of the poem, as well as the elements of poetry that help to create the theme–emotional plea, irony, asyndeton, antithesis, and parallel structures. Each of these five points would be discussed in its own paragraph in the body of the paper, so each of the points would be one point on the outline. In addition, the student should include some quotes from the poem for each point.
The outline might look something like this:
a)Hook: It is human nature to sometimes feel as if the world is just too much to bear. We experience tragedy and see injustice and might sometimes feel as if there is no hope left. Often just knowing that we are not alone is enough to push us to persevere another day.
- b) intro to the topic: While we might think this is a modern experience, William Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 66” proves that there really is nothing new under the sun.
- c) thesis: In this sonnet, Shakespeare uses an emotional plea, irony, asyndeton, antithesis, and parallel structures to show that, no matter how difficult life seems, the love of one person is enough to make life worth living.
- Author, special circumstances, summary of the poem
- Emotional Plea
- “Tired with all these, for restful death I cry” (Shakespeare, 1).
- “As, to behold a beggar born” (2)
- “And needy, nothing trimmed in jollity” (3)
- Begins each line with “and”
- “purest faith” “unhappily foresworn” (4)
- “gilded honor” “shamefully misplaced” (5)
- “Maiden virtue” “rudely strumpeted” (6)
- “right perfection” “wrongfully displaced”
- parallel structures
- “Strength disabled” (8)
- “art tongue-tied by authority” (9)
- “skill controlled by folly” (10)
- “truth misplaced” (11)
- “good held captive by ill” (12)
Here’s a video in which Dr. Palmer shows students how to create a thesis and outline of Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 66.”
Step 5: Drafting Your Paper
Once you have a clear idea of your thesis and the passages in the work that best support it, you can begin to shape and refine the essay.
Writing an Introduction
Make sure your introduction accurately reflects what you end up saying about the poem. You should start with a hook that connects the theme of the poem to your readers’ experiences. Avoid generalizations, but make sure to have some kind of attention grabber that will draw readers into the paper. Next, introduce the topic–in this case, you will want to include the author’s full name and the title of the poem. Finally, complete your introduction with your thesis.
Here is a video explaining how these three components create the foundation for a strong introduction and conclusion:
Writing the Argument
Make sure your body supports your thesis with good topic sentences and concrete examples…Remember that the best way to support a thesis is to cite and analyze carefully selected passages from the text that relate directly to it. You want to have at LEAST one quote from the poem or your sources in each body paragraph to support your thoughts.
Three parts of a paragraph
- Topic sentence/Claim
- Analysis—underscore relevance to thesis
Here’s an example body paragraph from a student paper on Lawrence’s poem, “Snake.” Note that the parts of the paragraph are formatted to match the three parts listed above.
Note how the last sentence tells the reader what the examples show. Also note that the in text citation shows the LINE of the poem only.
The Quote Formula
The Quote Formula is a formula for using quotes correctly in your writing. Always remember to surround quotes with your own words. You do this by introducing the quote and explaining the quote.
1. Introduce the quote. Here, you tell readers what the author is doing.
2. Give the quote. Here, you give an actual quote from the poem. Make sure to use quotation marks. The number after the quote is the line of the poem in which the quote is found.
3. Explain the quote. Tell readers what the quote means.
To illustrate, take a look at the next paragraph in the paper quoted above (formatted to match the three parts of the quote formula).
- Use Present Tense
- Include quotes from the poem (minimum of one per body paragraph)
- Include quotes from outside sources (minimum of one per body paragraph)
- Use MLA citation
Here’s a video in which Dr. Palmer shows how to write a draft of a paper from an outline:
Remember, your paper should be based on your own thoughts and observations about the poem. Your outside research should be used to support and strengthen your own thoughts!
Here’s a draft of the Shakespeare paper we’ve been discussing:
- MLA Citation and Steps content created by Dr. Karen Palmer and licensed under CC BY NC SA.
- All Examples created by Dr. Karen Palmer and licensed under CC BY NC SA.
- Content adapted from “Experiencing the Power of Poetry” by Tanya Long Bennet in Writing and Literature, licensed CC BY SA.